Critisisms from actual thing.
some critisisms were, that the outside shots didnt look very professional. Also, that the music didnt resemble a thriller theme. The music at times seemed to much, and made it feel cluttered.
Some people didnt understand when the flash backs were. and didnt know where the piece was heading. It ended a bit suddenley.
Some Good things though were...
There was good lighting throughout the piece, and people like the way we overlapped the scenes, and hought it was a good effect. They said that the titles were a good size Also that the inside shots and angles were good, and someone said that they didnt really know what was going on but thought it was a good thing as it built tension, and kep[t them interested. Other people said that the shadow shot of toby was good, and that there was a good fuzzy, out of focus shot.
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