the team (minus toby)

Critisisms from actual thing.
some critisisms were, that the outside shots didnt look very professional. Also, that the music didnt resemble a thriller theme. The music at times seemed to much, and made it feel cluttered.
Some people didnt understand when the flash backs were. and didnt know where the piece was heading. It ended a bit suddenley.
Some Good things though were...
There was good lighting throughout the piece, and people like the way we overlapped the scenes, and hought it was a good effect. They said that the titles were a good size Also that the inside shots and angles were good, and someone said that they didnt really know what was going on but thought it was a good thing as it built tension, and kep[t them interested. Other people said that the shadow shot of toby was good, and that there was a good fuzzy, out of focus shot.
yeh

target For THE WEST SIDE

hey guys (including sian)
Ite .... our target is to get all the shots in order and the rite length.
and get the music good =)
It will make everyone want to dance

hiya
well we got lots of feedback, and luckily not all negative, yippee, haha
we dont really have anything all the way through, which doesnt help, but we have a few good shts, which people tend to like.
some critisim, CONSTRUCTIVE critisism was...
-to make sure the music is in time
-to shorten clip lengths
-that the plot was hard to understand
-that maybe the the flashbacks faded in and out it would be easier to understand, as they seemed to just "pop up"
-too slow
-too long
-that the font doesnt fit properly, "too bold and buubley"
-not very "thriller" type music


so yeh, thanks alot, that what we need to work on
xxxxxILYxxxxx

SUP

ezi now boys and girls, finnished filming an ting, safe blad GET ME GET ME. WENT WELL or did it, yes, but did it really? of course it did, are you sure? yes