Feedback from animatic

The feedback from out animatic was fairly basic
we were told that our shots were mainly too short and you couldn't really tell what was going on.
we didn't have any titles in our animatic so people were asking how we would show them.
we have decided that we would have or titles on black screens in between shots, we have not decided what font we are going to have for our titles but, we think that a good font would be like a type writter. this would mean that it would also be good to have the sound of a type writter as the titles come up.