target For THE WEST SIDE

hey guys (including sian)
Ite .... our target is to get all the shots in order and the rite length.
and get the music good =)
It will make everyone want to dance

hiya
well we got lots of feedback, and luckily not all negative, yippee, haha
we dont really have anything all the way through, which doesnt help, but we have a few good shts, which people tend to like.
some critisim, CONSTRUCTIVE critisism was...
-to make sure the music is in time
-to shorten clip lengths
-that the plot was hard to understand
-that maybe the the flashbacks faded in and out it would be easier to understand, as they seemed to just "pop up"
-too slow
-too long
-that the font doesnt fit properly, "too bold and buubley"
-not very "thriller" type music


so yeh, thanks alot, that what we need to work on
xxxxxILYxxxxx

SUP

ezi now boys and girls, finnished filming an ting, safe blad GET ME GET ME. WENT WELL or did it, yes, but did it really? of course it did, are you sure? yes

allo chuck WE SHALL be filming during the friday lessons kok yrkrty cool buddy









































toby sucks willy.

Matchstick men

Our thriller name

We have decided that a good name for our thriller project would be 'The Sixth Commandment' this is because the sixth commandment is thou shalt not kill. we think that this is a good name because it relates to what is going to happen in our film.
peace out x

Feedback from animatic

The feedback from out animatic was fairly basic
we were told that our shots were mainly too short and you couldn't really tell what was going on.
we didn't have any titles in our animatic so people were asking how we would show them.
we have decided that we would have or titles on black screens in between shots, we have not decided what font we are going to have for our titles but, we think that a good font would be like a type writter. this would mean that it would also be good to have the sound of a type writter as the titles come up.